Mermaids

Mermaids

1 chapter / 162 words

Approximately less than a minute to read

Description:

"It's not what it seems" ~Swan Princess
Amazing Cover by Amelia Markey :)

Genres:

Writing, Fantasy, Poetry

Comments(18)

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4 months ago WingsofAnEagle said:

This is beautiful and breathtaking! Lol.... get it? BREATHTAKING... ha ha

Pokemon

4 months ago A.R. KYRON said:

This is so awesome. I really loved it. The poem flowed well and it's really vivid.

Keep it up! Great job.

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4 months ago Cali Aguon/Johanna Opal said:

I love this poem so much! I love writing poems too and every word had emotion. If you'd like to take a look at any of mine, I would appreciate it! ;)

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4 months ago Kandie Mandie said:

This is so enchanting! I love how captivating this is. I felt like I was right there with the mermaids! Loved it

Reviews(6)

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4 months ago Rae of Nevermore said:

This poem was so fluent and easy to follow. I absolutely loved the minimalistic detailing that left minds to wonder about her beauty and whether she's truly a siren in disguise. The formatting was brilliant and it almost seemed as if the words were moving with the rhythm of the mermaid's tail, kind of like a soundless hypnosis. Overall a very beautiful and powerful piece!

Sister

4 months ago Tasha said:

Holy crap I was enchanted with this poem. You have a wonderful way of putting the words together to make it like a melody. Keep up the good work