Mermaids

Mermaids

1 chapter / 162 words

Approximately less than a minute to read

Description:

"It's not what it seems" ~Swan Princess
Amazing Cover by Amelia Markey :)

Genres:

Writing, Fantasy, Poetry

Comments(15)

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6 days ago Kandie Mandie said:

This is so enchanting! I love how captivating this is. I felt like I was right there with the mermaids! Loved it

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25 days ago Ella said:

Great job! This was a cool concept. I especially liked when you repeated the first few lines at the end, that just came off as very nice to me, as if she's in a never ending cycle of repeatedly drowning people. That's pretty cool. (:

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26 days ago Allison Nightingale said:

This is a very pretty poem. Keep Writing!

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about 1 month ago Coral Vaci said:

This poem is written so nicely! :D I like how this tells a story too!

Reviews(5)

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10 days ago Tasha said:

Holy crap I was enchanted with this poem. You have a wonderful way of putting the words together to make it like a melody. Keep up the good work

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2 months ago Ellen H. said:

It's wonderful. However, the line "wet though beautiful". Something can be beautiful and wet. I would suggest better punctuation. Other than that, I can only call it mystic. In a good way. You should make a story out of it.