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14 chapters / 16646 words

Approximately about 1 hour to read

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Have you ever felt that in our world of imperfections it's almost impossible to find exactly what you want? Well, fear no more. We are now introducing our new invention, Cybermatics! We take what you want and program it into a robot who will do what you want, and only that. We could have the robot sent to you within as little as two days, but hurry now, the robots are going fast and resources are running low. The only way your going to get your hands on that perfect someone is to call now!

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Comments(39)

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over 6 years ago Willem said:

Please add!!! I really want to read more!

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over 6 years ago Sav The Fish said:

Good beginning, the end "If they do it won't end well" and a bit before that, I liked it. It was creepy and makes the reader wanna keep reading. Of course people will want to read if you say not to. xD This looks like it's going to get very interesting...Update soon?

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over 6 years ago Libby Harris said:

You've got a good start going. The only thing I would do would be to watch out for repetitive sentences, like "It was playing on the TV non stop. It never stopped."

Otherwise, I hope you continue the story!(:

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over 5 years ago Nora Lilly Ember said:

That was great. I love how you turned the story around and made the main character one of the cybermatics, truely amazing. You should really think about writing some more and maybe making the part with the "dream" easier to understand.

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over 5 years ago Winter Gregory said:

Overall, it was a very cool read that has given me some inspiration. In the 4th chapter, you wrote "luck" instead of "lucky". I have only gotten that far, but I can't wait to finish reading!