Runaway

Runaway

1 chapter / 61 words

Approximately less than 20 seconds to read

Description:

Running away from him

Genres:

Drama, Romance, Poetry

Comments(9)

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over 3 years ago Cynthia Oakley said:

this was really good, although personally I don't prefer poetry

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over 3 years ago Destinee Hopewell said:

Amazing!

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over 3 years ago Lu Lu Levy said:

Wow, amazing! This poem is so easy to relate to and very emotional. you convey the sense of wanting and having really well. Awesome job! ~Chloe

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over 3 years ago Cheyenne Cacy said:

Very relatable poem. Well written. I love the emotion you managed to capture in the words. Well done.

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over 3 years ago Serena Grace said:

I love this, it's very relatable.

Just a few points, stay in one tense, past or present (personally present would sound better)

Also, you say, "or they won't like me" and since you start by talking to a "you" I think you should stick to it, rather than they. That's the only critique I can come up with, I especially love the way you've formatted this, great job!

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over 3 years ago Shammi said:

Amazing! You have done a wonderful job writing this.

You are truly a very talented writer so keep up the great work (:

~Shamina