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READ THIS!! PRETTY PLEASE!Her mind is Blank. No memories of who is she is, where she is, or how she got there. My entry for the Forgotten contest, but I think I might make it into a story after the contest is done.
over 3 years ago Alexandra Lukawska said:
Wow i actually really loved it! Definetly hope you continue it! The character's view gives the reader a true understanding of her panic and suprise at her reality, and the reader takes those deep breaths with her! Great story overall and please continue! :)
over 3 years ago Natasha V. said:
Oh my gosh! Wow, this is really good. I think you NEED to keep going on this: I'm so intrigued!
over 3 years ago Vulpes said:
You MUST continue ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AS SOON AS NOW!!! I DON'T EVEN CARE IF IT'S AS SOON AS POSSIBLE
over 3 years ago Miette Leclair said:
Oh wow. That would be terrifying! I loved the character. It seems like, even though she's terrified, she's level headed and she realizes that she has to work through her problems. I can't wait to read more :)
over 3 years ago SOUR-PATCH101 said:
i love the ides and everything honestly i could see this becomeing a book in the future very detailed and you give a good sense of whats happening. The best thing is that right from the start you already want to keep reading to find out what is wrong with this chick and how she got there? Keep it up :)
over 3 years ago Christie-Lee Jose said:
This is an amazing story, I'm so glad I decided to read it! I can see you've put a lot of effort into writing this otherwise it's just what comes naturally I really like how you describe the setting. I especially loved the part where she had to check to see if she was a boy or a girl,I love this so much. Don't stop!