The Weekend

The Weekend

1 chapter / 2430 words

Approximately 12 minutes to read


WARNING: Content may offend. I also am aware of multiple grammatical and spelling errors. I will be going though this in the next couple of days.





over 3 years ago Dylan Furr said:

This story really wasn't my cup of tea. Don't get me wrong though, it did everything right. The characters were interesting, the language was pretty funny, and the pace wasn't too fast. But I just think that there wasn't a lot to tell about in this story. I mean, yeah they party pretty hard, so what? Please don't take this to be personal or as an insult, it's just my opinion. If you do feel insulted or feel this was personal please know that those were not my intentions.

Win_20150307_185450 (6)

over 3 years ago N.V. Melody said:

I really, really liked this story! It was face-paced and the language/voice was a great--funny, light-weight and relateable. And I don't know why, but when Edvin hit the floor doing crunches I burst out laughing XD Good job, Imma follow you now :)

Sentra steampunk

over 3 years ago Peter said:

I'll review it when I'm done. but so far I like it. I didn't catch anything, and you were smart to put the offense warning. I haven't taken offense to this at all, but I'm sure some others might. No errors, once again, and I'll finish reading ASAP. :3


over 3 years ago Jo said:

This was interesting. The POV was nice, although I was confused at times. I think you did an overall good job with displaying how the drug worked, and you rarely straight up say what's going on--I like that. There are a few grammatical errors, and as I stated before, times where I was confused, but those can be tweaked to make it perfect. Good work!



over 3 years ago Avalon Nightwick said:

While your MC's narration was excellent, there wasn't really a lot to go off in this piece. There are many subject briefly discussed throughout the writing, but none of them seem to connect to each other. I think this had the potential to be a really absorbing, bad ass sort of novel, but as of now, it's just decent. Good luck with this piece!


over 3 years ago Jaigar Julian said:

I did like the vibe from it and I found your writing pretty good. You do have some points that need a bit of editing but all in all its a very good job!