Pepperland

Pepperland

1 chapter / 1000 words

Approximately 5 minutes to read

Description:

I think it's pretty darn good. Come with me, take a trip to Pepperland. I tried to keep true to the song, hit all the points. :)

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almost 6 years ago Socksplz said:

Hm. I was a bit confused at first, and was already beginning to go through the story with a negative attitude when I realized that the abruptness of it was actually intended. The sentences are all very short and clipped, but it flows in a manner that's actually quite satisfying when you realize that this person has been intoxicated with a drug.

Normally, I would've hated this sort of writing style, but I'm actually a bit impressed with how you managed to pull this off. The quick scene changes forces one (the reader) to stay attentive to the story, and is a test to the imagination. I would've liked an alternate ending, perhaps a reflection on what she'd just experienced, but the way it ended leaves much to the imagination and is very well executed.

All in all, a job well done.

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about 6 years ago Angela Richart said:

Wow, once I started reading this I couldn't put it down. This piece reminds me of a pinball, bouncing around from place to place, but in a good way! There was never a dull moment reading this. The description and detail was very vivid. I could almost see it.

Although I am not familiar with The Beatles, or the song. I think this is a terrific piece and I loved it. Other than a few spelling errors, this was amazing. You are truly a really gifted writer. Keep up all the great work! (: -Angie