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This is a poem of me. If there are spelling errors... sorry.
11 months ago Eleanor Cole said:
Its amazing how short of a poem you write that conveys so much emotion, raw, beautiful and real. You didn't feel the need to go over the top with figurative language; you just stated the facts as they were, yet that didn't sacrifice the abstract beauty of the piece. This demonstrates lots of talent and I commend you. You deserved every heart you got on this poem.
about 1 year ago Maire Dei said:
Very short but it speaks a lot of raw emotions here. I can relate.
about 1 year ago Baffy Pie Crust said:
is that u in the picture?
over 1 year ago Mwape lillian Chibuye said:
LOvely poem.I can relate.
over 1 year ago Ariadne said:
You say this is a poem of you but it doesn't really say anything about you except for the books over parties. THe rest was of what the poem wasn't. Or were you insinuating that you are the type where you avoid the question and kind of give an answer that is related to what's being asked but not what they meant? If not then sorry, I was just wondering.
almost 2 years ago T.M.T.U. said:
Nice poem! My only comments are it feels like it needs to be longer. If this is a poem about you, then just where are you? You never really introduce yourself. The only thing we know is that you had snobs (and geeks), and like reading. That's not really much for a poem about YOU. If you're going to write about you, do it right, INTRODUCE YOURSELF. And on a minor note, 'beginnings' was too small, I could just BARELY read it. Still, a good start. Keep on writing!
P.S. - Would you read any one of my stories?