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1011435

1 chapter / 4209 words

Approximately 21 minutes to read

Description:

There's a facility tucked deep away where no one will find it. In the sterile building, there are two experiments who have built an unlikely bond through unconventional communication. The two formulate a plan for escape, and when the opportunity comes, they run.

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about 2 years ago Seimun Kwon said:

Telekinesis is the ability to move objects with your mind. Telepathy is the ability to communicate with others with your mind. Learn the difference.

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about 2 years ago Isabella Youmans said:

I think it's pretty great, your grammar could use some work, but all in all it's great. I was on the edge of my seat...

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about 2 years ago Emily Moran said:

oh. my. God. PLEASE tell me that you're eventually going to continue 10 and 12's story!! I loved this I read the whole thing in school :)

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over 2 years ago Grace said:

Great story! Oh, and by the way, telekinesis is moving things with your mind, not communicating soundlessly.

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7 days ago Rosalie Moire said:

This is very well written; you can describe the emotional turmoil of the characters descriptively without making the story weighty. It keeps usually skeptical readers engaged from the first paragraph.

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5 months ago Angora said:

Literally in love. Thanks for sharing your talent with the rest of us!