The Same Coin

The Same Coin

1 chapter / 296 words

Approximately 1 minute to read





over 3 years ago J.C. Marie said:

Just go over grammar, especially around the quotations. There was a capitalized letter after a quote where there shouldn't have been, and there was a period at the end of a quote where it should have been a comma. It just seemed a but rushed and confused. You can go into more detail, give us more background on the siblings and their relationship to Allison. Their connections seem underdeveloped. I like the idea, and given a little more work think this could be a great piece. Good luck and thanks for the swap!


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