Want to follow along with this writing? Sign up Today, it's free and easy
Approximately 3 minutes to read
#Julychallenge entry! Death is the true enemy. *Beautiful Cover by Niki Caldwell*
over 2 years ago Christine Graeme said:
It's an eccentric idea taken from the prompt. I really enjoyed it. I loved the voice and tone you used. I think it is a great story. Great job.
over 2 years ago kayperl said:
Wow, makes me want to live every day and appreciate what I have. Very good lesson for all of us.
over 2 years ago J.C. Marie said:
This is such a unique take on the prompt. It drew mean from the beginning. I loved the quote in the beginning. I think it gave us something to think about. Great work and thanks for the swap!
over 2 years ago Sarah Sundermeyer said:
This is a very unique take on the prompt, I really like it! It may be a deliberate decision of yours to do so, but I think the story is told very casually, and I think it could benefit with a bit better word choice in some places. Overall I loved it though, I think it is a great story with some wonderful morals behind it. Great job :)
There aren't any reviews just yet. You should be the first to write a review.