As Sky Lay Dying

As Sky Lay Dying

1 chapter / 707 words

Approximately 4 minutes to read


July Challenge Winner

Poetry is a mirror which makes beautiful that which is distorted.
-Percy Shelley


Writing, Poetry



over 2 years ago E. Anderson [ON VACATION] said:

That was beautiful and amazing. I love poetry, and seeing you describe this as you was amazing. Thanks.


over 2 years ago Sky said:

Wow love it! It was so beautiful!


over 2 years ago blue cat said:

I love it! This is so poetic and beautiful. great job!

After all it was you and me

over 2 years ago Lindsay Thomaston said:

This is awesome! There are a few lines here and there where I wish the amount of syllables would be more consistent, but the diction is really beautiful, and the rhyme scheme is great nonetheless. Good job, and congrats on placing. :)



over 1 year ago Joshua Troy Sulentic said:

The rhyme scheme is well mended with the figurative language and creative writing to create a beautiful poem about the war between Heaven and Earth waged by Hell, and to show that the Good will always conquer the Evil, even in times of despair or trial.


over 1 year ago Kimberly Quill said:

Oh my word that was BEAUTIFUL, and I don't say that lightly. I don't care how late I am getting to this, I LOVED it!