As Sky Lay Dying

As Sky Lay Dying

1 chapter / 707 words

Approximately 4 minutes to read

Description:

July Challenge Winner

Poetry is a mirror which makes beautiful that which is distorted.
-Percy Shelley

Genres:

Writing, Poetry

Comments(23)

Justdewit

about 1 year ago Kimberly Quill said:

I come back to read this again every once in a while. I've said it before and I'll say it again: This piece is amazing.

And the title is pretty boss too.

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over 1 year ago Londyn Free said:

I totally agree with Riley

Large (3)

about 2 years ago riley mei said:

Omigosh beautiful and amazing. No wonder you won lol(:

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about 2 years ago E. Anderson said:

That was beautiful and amazing. I love poetry, and seeing you describe this as you did...it was amazing. Thanks.

Reviews(13)

Usma

11 months ago Joshua Sulentic said:

The rhyme scheme is well mended with the figurative language and creative writing to create a beautiful poem about the war between Heaven and Earth waged by Hell, and to show that the Good will always conquer the Evil, even in times of despair or trial.

Justdewit

about 1 year ago Kimberly Quill said:

Oh my word that was BEAUTIFUL, and I don't say that lightly. I don't care how late I am getting to this, I LOVED it!