As Sky Lay Dying

As Sky Lay Dying

1 chapter / 707 words

Approximately 4 minutes to read


July Challenge Winner

Poetry is a mirror which makes beautiful that which is distorted.
-Percy Shelley


Writing, Poetry



over 2 years ago E. Anderson said:

That was beautiful and amazing. I love poetry, and seeing you describe this as you was amazing. Thanks.


over 2 years ago Sky said:

Wow love it! It was so beautiful!


over 2 years ago blue cat said:

I love it! This is so poetic and beautiful. great job!

After all it was you and me

almost 3 years ago Lindsay Thomaston said:

This is awesome! There are a few lines here and there where I wish the amount of syllables would be more consistent, but the diction is really beautiful, and the rhyme scheme is great nonetheless. Good job, and congrats on placing. :)



about 1 month ago Sky Lark said:

THIS story is fantastically captivating with the rhyming with the battle, everything. I could see everything unfold in my head and I have to say it was beautiful. You did a very good job


over 1 year ago Joshua Troy Sulentic said:

The rhyme scheme is well mended with the figurative language and creative writing to create a beautiful poem about the war between Heaven and Earth waged by Hell, and to show that the Good will always conquer the Evil, even in times of despair or trial.