With a Kiss

With a Kiss

1 chapter / 616 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read

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~Winner of the July Challenge~ “Even death has a heart.”
― Markus Zusak, The Book Thief

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about 2 years ago Vanishing Starlight said:

I think what really makes this a good story is your use of details and the senses. :) I love stories like these. nice work!

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over 2 years ago Kelsey Kendall said:

Beautifully written! A little short, in my opinion, but still incredible!

After all it was you and me

over 2 years ago Lindsay Thomaston said:

Personifying death as both a villain and savior- super cool! Good job. :)

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over 2 years ago Isa Bel said:

I really like the idea behind this story! Keep the good work up!

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about 1 year ago Lady Red said:

I love how you made Death a person, and when you killed off the girl, you showed me that death is inevitable and that what goes around comes right back around. Good job, I hope you continue this!

Beautiful cecil

over 1 year ago ScarlettFyre said:

I really enjoyed this. Death is such an interesting figure and I always love reading stories that explore him (or her, I suppose). It's part of why I enjoyed The Book Thief so much. That and the fact that I just love an eccentric narrator.

Anyway, back on topic. The descriptions were amazing and you set the scene so perfectly. I also loved the way you suggested at the torture rather than described it. It worked a lot better than if you had described it in detail- then you run the risk of either making it too tame, or shocking the reader so much it isn't creepy anymore.

Anyway, well done on an amazing story!