With a Kiss

With a Kiss

1 chapter / 616 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read

Description:

~Winner of the July Challenge~ “Even death has a heart.”
― Markus Zusak, The Book Thief

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3 months ago Joy said:

I really enjoy your short story. I like the setting and your perspective of death. You show death as a person or spirit that doesn't particularly like there job. Shows that they have human like qualities. I'd love to see more. Good Writing, Joy

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over 1 year ago Kimberly Tenneson said:

It has an eerie beauty - haunting, even. I would love to hear more of this story and more of the character. Beautifully written!

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over 1 year ago Shemona Singh said:

Very well written! Your description is beautiful.

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over 1 year ago Mothusi Mopie said:

THIS STORY IS AWSOME ;) PLEASE POST MORE CHAPTERS

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over 1 year ago Kimberly Tenneson said:

This is carriage ride through a misty graveyard; both serene and disturbing. Shelby has managed to compress the dark, brooding anti-hero into such a brief 'snapshot', that the reader is drawn into a sense of cautious sympathy for Death; rooting for it and dreading it at the same time! Beautifully written and expertly presented.