Demon

Demon

1 chapter / 1000 words

Approximately 5 minutes to read

Description:

this short story is the reason i don't do swaps anymore

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over 3 years ago rae said:

Your command of words in this short story is absolutely fantastic. I love the way your imagery is written so intensely that it practically jumps off the page and smacks you in the face (in a good way, y'know)!

You've got a really unique concept in this story and it fits really well with your writing style. (I absolutely adored the line "She's not a demon, but rather a conscience -- a weak, dying, and starving conscience.")

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over 3 years ago Olivia Terrence said:

this was extremely powerful an well written. great job!

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over 3 years ago Marlo Chewwie said:

Your word choice and fluidity is simply impeccable.

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over 3 years ago Maryam Naz said:

o...m...g....this was exceptional. your vocabulary choice was exquisite, it really added a certain flow to the piece, so that it was easy to read. i want to read more, write moooore!

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almost 3 years ago Beth said:

Very captivating story. I couldn't stop reading, well written.

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almost 3 years ago Kay said:

I think you did an awesome job!! I enjoyed it. Thank you!!