Demon

Demon

1 chapter / 1000 words

Approximately 5 minutes to read

Description:

this short story is the reason i don't do swaps anymore

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over 3 years ago Redde Maise said:

I really liked the big long words. Seriously. They just made me really happy. The one off thing I noticed was the description of the room. Stark white walls contrasting with rich, red-brownish floors and furniture made me think someone didn't finish decorating, but the demon seemed to be a sort of tasteful guy who would never leave a room unfinished.I'm aware this was for the scrimmages, but just thought I'd point that out :).

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almost 3 years ago Beth said:

Very captivating story. I couldn't stop reading, well written.

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almost 3 years ago Kay said:

I think you did an awesome job!! I enjoyed it. Thank you!!