1 chapter / 1000 words

Approximately 5 minutes to read


this short story is the reason i don't do swaps anymore

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over 1 year ago Avery Cloud-Estep said:

Your story grasped me immediately and the details were in-depth enough that I was able to imagine everything perfectly. I would have loved for there to be more of the story! It did not end abruptly at all, but instead left me wanting more.

On a side note, sometime last year you asked me to do a swap with you and that was when I was on a too long hiatus from this website and did not see the request until today. If you are still interested in doing your part of the swap, read any story I have, if not, I completely understand. Thanks!



almost 3 years ago Michelle C. said:

I found it very connected and I could imagine the main character and his everyday choices to be amusing.

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almost 3 years ago KadiMaeSpear said:

I liked it in the fact that it was only 1000 words and that was the limit. If you take that out, it was lacking. It was very choppy and it made it hard to focus on the fact that it was actually very good. Maybe expand on it and the whole thing would be good.