1 chapter / 1000 words

Approximately 5 minutes to read


this short story is the reason i don't do swaps anymore

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over 1 year ago Avery Cloud-Estep said:

Your story grasped me immediately and the details were in-depth enough that I was able to imagine everything perfectly. I would have loved for there to be more of the story! It did not end abruptly at all, but instead left me wanting more.

On a side note, sometime last year you asked me to do a swap with you and that was when I was on a too long hiatus from this website and did not see the request until today. If you are still interested in doing your part of the swap, read any story I have, if not, I completely understand. Thanks!



about 3 years ago Emu Allan said:

Great work, I loved it. One suggestion? Each time you said purple, it rubbed me the wrong way. The rest of the language is so elevated, it feels wrong to ruin that. Maybe violet? Or another color? Just not purple.

Please not purple.

Anyway, I really liked it!

Thanks for sharing and don't bother with a swap for me ;)

Emu Allan


about 3 years ago A.N. Young said:

Holy crap major chill bumps definitely worthy of the heart. The only thing I'd change is the colors of insecurity and envy have envy be green and insecurity orange but thats just my thoughts. I LOVED THIS STORY!!!