Demon

Demon

1 chapter / 1000 words

Approximately 5 minutes to read

Description:

this short story is the reason i don't do swaps anymore

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Comments(205)

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over 1 year ago Avery Cloud-Estep said:

Your story grasped me immediately and the details were in-depth enough that I was able to imagine everything perfectly. I would have loved for there to be more of the story! It did not end abruptly at all, but instead left me wanting more.

On a side note, sometime last year you asked me to do a swap with you and that was when I was on a too long hiatus from this website and did not see the request until today. If you are still interested in doing your part of the swap, read any story I have, if not, I completely understand. Thanks!

Reviews(53)

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almost 3 years ago Robert Francis said:

The story was steamy and really dark. I imagined the story would make a great novel without the 1,000 word limit.

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about 3 years ago Korra Ly said:

I really liked it, but I felt like something was lacking. I know you only had a 1,000 word limit, yet there is so much you can do with 1,000 words. I don't know much about the contest you're doing, but you could have expressed what that power meant to him. Dig deeper! I only saw a demon who loved his job which could have been any demon. Amazing story, breathing a bit more life into the dead would be nice.