[Ctrl]+[Shift]+C = Move_Objects On

[Ctrl]+[Shift]+C = Move_Objects On

1 chapter / 714 words

Approximately 4 minutes to read

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A story of the supervised life of a Sim.

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over 2 years ago Ian Dennis said:

I've never played "Sims", but fortunately, I didn't need to have in order to understand this story. This was very good, despite the tragic ending- thanks for sharing!

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over 2 years ago Patience Teboe said:

Awesome. I haven't played the Sims, but I understood it. I liked the way you made the controllers seem so evil and the Sim so helpless

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over 2 years ago Tyler Haigh said:

The glitch in this game where your baby stretches 10 feet tall is weird!

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over 2 years ago Lily Hanke said:

I've only played the Sims a few times in my life, and I understood it perfectly. There was some really great dialogue in here. My favorite line was, "Wabadebadoo!" So much expression in a single word. I could sense that the struggle was truly real.

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over 2 years ago Lydia Nixon said:

Very well written! I love how you managed to convey the frustration of such a hopeless struggle, while at the same time emphasizing the humor of the situation. I haven’t played the Sims, but you set it up well enough that I was still able to follow along and enjoy the story. You also did a good job of making “Them” seem like these sadistic gods who decide the Sims’ fate on by whim alone. Nice touch. There were a few places where the punctuation and word choice seemed to not fit, but since it was told from the perspective of a Sim, I wasn’t sure if that was a writing error or me simply not understanding how the Sims think and speak. Just check it over for the final draft to see if you had any typos.