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24 days ago q28821 said:
The first casualty of war is the truth
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12 months ago Martine Holmes said:
The dark twist is really clever and daring because not many people have the guts to actually write this way about the much-beloved Animal Crossing. I also enjoyed all the descriptive words and character perspective. This may seem cliché, but this is one of the best stories I've read in quite a while.
almost 2 years ago Inedible said:
LOL I love this. In my younger years I loved playing this game on the wii. Man, I haven't thought about it in years.
over 2 years ago Lydia Nixon said:
LOVE the first paragraph. I don’t care who you are, you can’t help but want to read the rest of the story after seeing that.
One grammatical note: with compound sentences (two complete thoughts combined), make sure that the comma comes before the coordinating conjunction (e.g. “They were all exactly the same, so I peeked into the first house…”
I’ve never heard of Animal Crossing, so it was a little hard to follow, but I could still appreciate the dry humor that you used to describe such an unusual situation. Nicely done!