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Winner of the "Skink -- No Surrender Contest." An unlikely friendship between a goddess and a human boy. Word limit: 500 words May be expanded on in the future. Cover made by me.
over 2 years ago Anastasia Lockheart said:
about 1 year ago Nicole. H said:
So the only error I could find was to change "the guise" to "the disguise.
The detail and imagery was all there and I enjoyed the piece.
over 2 years ago Amie fortman said:
This was such a lovely piece. I loved the imagery in your first few paragraphs; you really get a sense of the grandeur and lonely beauty of the universe. And Andromeda's awkwardness in human form was actually pretty cute--poor thing just wants a companion. :) My only criticism is that you could expand this a bit more. There were a lot of throw-away details, like Andromeda's brother forsaking the rest of the universe for Earth, that could have been really fascinating. I guess I'm just selfish--I'd really love to see a full-length novel based on this. Great idea, and great job!