April Showers

April Showers

1 chapter / 822 words

Approximately 4 minutes to read

Description:

A short story I wrote for SUPER creative writing club at school. I tried to be as creative as I could so here it is, The life of a raindrop.

Comments(4)

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over 2 years ago Penelope Jenna Hensley said:

I was so oddly submersed in this, and can't help but wonder if there is a lot of hidden symbolism in this or it's just my overthinking mind. A+.

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almost 3 years ago Olive Rajani said:

So cute:)

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almost 3 years ago A.J. Cypher said:

I love the tone of this story. The sort of matter of fact, slightly humorous way that everything is written. Which is great when you take a topic like Heaven and write about it that way.

I like how abstract it is too. It really adds to the beauty of the piece. Well done!

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about 3 years ago Audrey Fraizer said:

I like it, Kinda random. :)

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almost 3 years ago Ryann Asher said:

I do love this story, it really is super creative. The only thing that gets me is that he becomes the pond, because wouldn't all the other raindrops become the pond, too? Other than that, it's very amazing. I do love the journey of your little raindrop.

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almost 3 years ago Spinly Gribblegale said:

I like the concept of this story, it's very creative and well written. I didn't spot any grammar mistakes (though that may just be me). I really enjoyed this