Medusa's Heart

Medusa's Heart

1 chapter / 493 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

WINNER of MythicalWorld contest! A young girl, cursed with the power of Medusa, struggles to overcome her power and live the ones she loves.Challenges are a part of daily life for her. When will she be free?

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about 1 year ago Dorival Oliveira said:

You wrote a great book, I like it very much!

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over 1 year ago Emily Alice said:

It was beautifully written. I could feel the overwhelming emotion. Thank you for sharing.

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over 2 years ago Evani Radiya-Dixit said:

This is so beautifully written!

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over 2 years ago D I Hernandez said:

I'm gonna keep thinking about all this suffering of the cursed business for the rest of the decade, WOW.

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25 days ago lol nope said:

Grammar review:

"I swear, this will be the last time I ever lose control of my curse." There shouldn't be a comma after "swear".

"He walks over to me, and clasps my icy hands." There shouldn't be a comma after "me".

"He carefully averts my eyes, but instead gently twirls a strand . . ." There should be a comma after "instead".

I hope this helps! Good piece.

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7 months ago Joy said:

This was a beautiful piece and I'd love for the story to continue! I love Greek Mythology and this version of the story is perfect. She isn't the bitter Medusa that everyone knows but the fighting type that loves her family. The one that will never give up and keeps going through the pain. The description of her training was great, I could imagine the scene in my head and that is what makes a great story for me. Good Writing, Joy