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A young soldier laments over his brother lost in a Civil War.
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about 3 years ago Marlo Chewwie said:
Hey, I just found this figment surfing. I like the way you show raw emotion. However, maybe it's just a pet peeve of mine, but one thing that I always try to do a really good job on in my writing is not to re-use too many words...a broader vocabulary makes you look distinguished. So, if it was me, I'd crank open that thesaurus and find new ways to say "damned" and "cold dead weight."
good job though :)
over 3 years ago H.R.Baylor said:
Hi Im trying to get my haiku hearted so please read and heart if deserving and ill do the same for your work. I also have other poetry that i have written.
almost 4 years ago Aviline said:
This is amazing. It's so beautiful. So amazing. Congrats on being on the homepage.
over 2 years ago Crystal Rose Selburn said:
I agree with both of them, that basically sums it up. It's amazing! Keep writing and inspiring! :)
You write amazingly while reading i felt as though i was in the middle of the scene,fantastic job.