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My entry for the AutumnFalls contest (as you can probably tell from all the tags)
It's basically about a girl in Beijing who one day, discovers she can control the world through her dreams...
Enjoy and COMMENT please if you do read!
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about 2 years ago Mursal said:
Hi there! I loved your story! Would you be interested in a swap? If yes, please read my story "Nothing Like Us." and heart it. Thanks, and again, nice job!
over 2 years ago Tibby Kay said:
There isn't a lot of suspense from her getting her wings. I expected something a bit more dramatic, especially since potentially painful feathers just pushed through her skin.
Wings just sprouted from her back, how is she so sure she's the first? After reading further, it is explained, I guess.
-but it was the first smile in a weeks.- In weeks, or in a week?
Well, this is definitely interesting. Having your dreams come true, literally. It would make an interesting novel, you should think about that.
Anywho, best of luck with the contest(:
over 2 years ago Stephanie Marasco said:
this was cool, I liked your characters name though I was not quite sure how to pronounce it. Anyways this seems like a really good piece, overall you had nice details and the flow was very smooth. Good luck in the contest!
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