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written with threee people in mind, but one specifically.
over 5 years ago Sheri said:
over 5 years ago Zara the Shikara tara said:
I love this.
almost 6 years ago Rachel Rose Chevalier Gordon said:
I really like it! My only crit would be turning "not-anymore-so-distant" to simply "not so distant", but really well done!
almost 6 years ago Alyssa R said:
You probably didn't try for it, but the emotions were all tinges. There was a tinge of a grudge, a tinge of loss. A pale background of (detached?) sorrow.
I may be reading into this, because friends have read my poetry and said "nice job on the xyz, youreally expressed the abc well," and I was left standing there thinking "well, I didn't know I did that, it certainly wasn't my goal..." and had no reply to them but an awkward "uh, thanks."
I should probably stop my babbling, I'm sure you've read enough, but I really liked the poem.
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