The Boy in the Book

The Boy in the Book

1 chapter / 976 words

Approximately 5 minutes to read

Description:

For Off The Page contest | Emily Rubio's best friend asks her to read a new book series. Though reluctant, Emily gives it a try only to realize the main hero, Julian Sinclair, is the most perfect boy.

Comments(10)

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over 1 year ago Sophia d'Amiguet said:

I loved the characters, humour and tone of voice. Well done! BTW, was that fake series loosely based on the Mortal Instrument series? Hehe ^^

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almost 2 years ago Jess Arwen said:

I love it all, but I think my favourite part was the last line, haha. Please write more. :)

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almost 2 years ago Jess Arwen said:

I love it all, but I think my favourite part was the last line, haha. Please write more. :)

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almost 2 years ago Kaylee said:

i really liked how you built suspense throughout your piece, and how you waited until the final few lines to have the character come out of the book. i got chills reading the ending and wondered why he didn't seem too excited about Caroline's wish. if you have time you should definitely expand this after the contest!

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