my missing beauty

my missing beauty

4 chapters / 408 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

i search for it
i may never find my missing beauty

Comments(6)

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almost 3 years ago Lilonda said:

Wow, this was really good. I liked it a lot :)

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almost 3 years ago Aennli Sky said:

I don't usually read poetry, but I like this. It flows really well. One thing I noticed was on day 16 where it says, "when did my heart get so full of never minds" I think you should connect "never" and "mind" with a hyphen so that it's not confusing. Other than that, I thought this was great!

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almost 3 years ago Tasha Stuart-Lowe said:

Beautiful. I'm not usually one for poetry, but these were lovely and very easy to read. Good job!

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about 3 years ago Charlotte said:

These are amazing poems. Well written, they seem to be carefully thought out but at the same time are very raw and impactful!

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almost 3 years ago Alix Armani said:

@Mena,

Wow.

Okay, I admit, I can relate to this a lot. So, I guess that's part of the reason I love it, but it's also a very good poem. And, I know good poetry when I see it.

The only thing wrong with it being that all the Is aren't capitalized, but I'm guessing that's just how you write, so...

The meaning behind this, (As far as I can tell,) is very sad, and very beautiful, and very true of a lot of people.

I KNOW a decent amount of people it's true for.

So congratulations. This was an amazing poem.

And good luck.

-Alix

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almost 3 years ago viola_masters said:

These are excellent! It's very interesting that they're written in stages, and it reads well that you went through them all. Your energy and feelings really glow throughout this piece. Brilliant work! Thanks for swapping!