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**WINTER WRITING CONTEST WINNER** My little sister, Summer is dying but I plan to make her smile one last time.
over 1 year ago Izzy Carter said:
I'm left broken hearted!
over 1 year ago AlwaysAiyana said:
I never cry, but this made me! Well a tear slipped! The only other thing that made me cry was "Where The Red Fern Grows"
I can't believe you did that! You are very talented of you can actually make me cry!!!
about 2 years ago Emily Clarisse said:
Beautiful and tragic!
about 2 years ago Hazel Nethershine said:
This is amazing! Very sad, but amazing! Great characters, plot and I didn't see any spelling or grammar mistakes. You definatly derserved to win!
about 2 years ago Tate Thurgood (KONY 2012) said:
I cannot even properly put into words what I'm feeling right now. Just--WOW! That was so incredible! Your characters were amazing and the storyline was short, sweet, and completely heartbreaking. Summer was an immediately lovable character and I instantly liked her sister as well. When they put the snowflakes up I nearly lost it because that was so SWEET. And then that monotone wail came and she ran and the snowflake fell -- I freaking KNEW that would happen, dang it! -- and I had to physically stop myself from sobbing. Honestly, that was so beautiful! I can't find anything to fix! :D