Bright Corners

Bright Corners

1 chapter / 203 words

Approximately 1 minute to read

Description:

The bright corner in my life that is my inspiration. Beautiful bright corners are for everyone but everyone's is different. For the All The Bright Places Contest.

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about 2 years ago Kylee Raventos said:

I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to critique your work! I've just been so busy lately, I hope you understand. Overall, I really liked this piece. It reminded me of the favorite parts of my childhood! The animals, the house, the woods... all very crucial parts to fantasy writing. Really well done!

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almost 3 years ago Shayymin said:

One thing I have to say, is that a couple of times when you were describing the woods, you should have said are instead of is, then at the end you used the word, "My own personal hangout" which seemed a bit out of place for previous wording.

Other than that, I really liked it, and I thought the story was lovely, very descriptive, and interesting to read.