Caged

Caged

1 chapter / 2324 words

Approximately 12 minutes to read

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Just a little something I wrote for a competition in English class.

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almost 3 years ago Chloe C. said:

A few mistakes spotted, but generally it's okay and not affecting the story much. You have made the story mysterious as I can feel something like 'no one should I trust' but I think you can work more on the suspense to make it more exciting and abstruse.

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almost 3 years ago Olivia C. said:

This was really good! A few grammar mistakes, but nothing to fuss about. I really like the opposing view points...makes you wonder who to believe

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