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Please read this. All comments are appreciated! This is a song I wrote about a lot of different things. The "you" referred to in the song can and should be interpreted in different ways.
8 months ago Victoria Guyadeen said:
I absloutly love this! It's amazing!! Keep writting :)
about 1 year ago Andi (I-not-Y) said:
Incredibly emotional..Wow...Really good picture of your train of thought.
about 1 year ago Zan said:
I really liked reading this, and because I'm a singing freak, I sang it as well. Everything flows really well, but I would try making the chorus a little longer. Great job, though!
about 1 year ago Becky Hill said:
So much like a situation I'm still going through... Beautifully written and completely heartwrenching. I love it :)
about 1 year ago Solanova said:
I am in love with this poem. You have a great balance of rhyme and rhythm, and the subject matter is something that I think a lot of people can relate to. Wonderful work.
over 1 year ago Lady Clo said:
the first "you're" should actually be "your". I love lyrics/poetry - nice work :D