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Please read this. All comments are appreciated! This is a song I wrote about a lot of different things. The "you" referred to in the song can and should be interpreted in different ways.
about 3 years ago Victoria Guyadeen said:
I absloutly love this! It's amazing!! Keep writting :)
over 3 years ago st. hurston said:
Incredibly emotional..Wow...Really good picture of your train of thought.
over 3 years ago Becky Hill said:
So much like a situation I'm still going through... Beautifully written and completely heartwrenching. I love it :)
over 3 years ago 654321 said:
Great poem! I loved this! Nice rhyme scheme and great message. So powerful.
almost 4 years ago Clodie said:
the first "you're" should actually be "your". I love lyrics/poetry - nice work :D