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Please read this. All comments are appreciated! This is a song I wrote about a lot of different things. The "you" referred to in the song can and should be interpreted in different ways.
over 1 year ago Victoria Guyadeen said:
I absloutly love this! It's amazing!! Keep writting :)
almost 2 years ago cassandra said:
Incredibly emotional..Wow...Really good picture of your train of thought.
almost 2 years ago Becky Hill said:
So much like a situation I'm still going through... Beautifully written and completely heartwrenching. I love it :)
almost 2 years ago Shia F said:
Great poem! I loved this! Nice rhyme scheme and great message. So powerful.
almost 2 years ago Solanova said:
I am in love with this poem. You have a great balance of rhyme and rhythm, and the subject matter is something that I think a lot of people can relate to. Wonderful work.
about 2 years ago Lady Clo said:
the first "you're" should actually be "your". I love lyrics/poetry - nice work :D