Expected...

Expected...

1 chapter / 124 words

Approximately half a minute to read

Description:

**WINNER**
Family Expectations Contest

Genres:

Writing, Short Story

Comments(3)

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over 1 year ago Lauren F. said:

I really like how you described things in this story. Please add more! :)

Caldir

about 2 years ago Jasmine Lewis said:

Is this for a contest? If so amazing! I didn't see any grammar issues as I read through this and the emotion you add with the wording was great! I love the flow of this piece and very much enjoyed it. This could certainly make a stunning prologue for a book if you consider turning it into a full novel at some point. Well done!

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about 2 years ago nikki foster (Kat) said:

OH My. I think this should be a winner, I am going to be writing my own entry but this is so extreme, so eye catching you are an amazing writer.

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