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Approximately 6 minutes to read
War, Death, Robots, and Pink Mush! Will the Wasted-Pointless war ever end? Or will the Endless Eves of the last and final battle march on forever? There's only one way to find out...
Cover by the most excellent Fig-artist Rhina Matsuda.
over 2 years ago Lee Morvan said:
wow i really enjoyed reading this! nice job! :D (sorry this is short, i have to go....)
over 2 years ago Aaron Adagio (Aangy) said:
kªsey felix, page 2 of the comments: THAT'S THE POINT!!! HAVING A "LAST BATTLE TO END ALL BATTLES" IS RIDICULOUS! THE ENTIRE PIECE IS SATIRE!!! AND EVERY COUNTRY WRITING DOWN THE NAME OF THE COUNTRY TO ITS LEFT IS THE POINT! IT WOULD !OBVIOUSLY! STILL WORK OUT AND THE AUTHOR KNEW THIS, EVEN IF YOU DIDN'T KNOW THAT THEY KNEW WHAT THEY WERE WRITING! THAT'S THE POINT! IT'S HILARIOUS! Also, I kinda like the writing style with too many "ands" and lengthy sentences... It added an element of humor-for me at least.
To Sarah Gerton and the viewing public:
I liked the wordiness of "the sub-junior temporary part-time assistant journalist" because it made it even more humorous. Which the entire piece IS. Also, calling it the Wasted, Pointless War is COOLIO because it adds EMPHASIS and MORE HUMOR!!! WHICH I LOVE!! AWESOMENESS!!!
over 3 years ago Jaz Higgs said:
I like this, I found it odd but really cool :) well done
over 2 years ago clarisse sofia said:
I LOVE it and it was pretty amazing for me and my sister
P.S we were reading it together
but, at some parts of the really confused me and my sister we did not know what was happening so I got lost in some parts of that story my sister kinda got what it meant but I got sooo lost so please EDIT your book
KEEP IT UP & KEEP WRITING
over 3 years ago D.T. Brumwell said:
Interesting, at some parts of the story it got confusing not knowing whats actually happening but it was good.