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Short story for the bright places contest(: #BrightPlaces #brightplacescontest
about 1 year ago Emily Rose said:
I actually have read that book too so this was really relate able.
almost 2 years ago CeceO (On&off) said:
Wonderful quote, lovely read
about 2 years ago Ayman Fatima said:
This was beautifully written. Though I think the last two or three lines have room for improvement.
about 2 years ago Neona Nyx said:
I love this! I like how describe (any) book in great detail and how it makes you feel. You described for other bookworms how good books are and how they can suck you into another world in his pages.
almost 2 years ago Elzie Bleu said:
I love this piece, I feel like it's very easy to relate to as a reader and writer and I think all of your descriptions are lovely :) great job
about 2 years ago Penelope Jenna Hensley said:
This was excellent. Though there are just a few mistakes, this is a great piece. You definitely made this work, even with the word restriction. I loved this probably because I can relate to it so much. I am in the eighth grade and I am publishing a book currently; I've also always been the "odd one out," as you call it. Just read over it and give it a good clincher and hook sentence. You've surely got a chance here.