Vacant Memory #1

Vacant Memory #1

6 chapters / 4546 words

Approximately 23 minutes to read

Description:

Book One of The Vacant Memory Series - Meet Nikita, a teen who was born with the power of time travel, or was she? Memories of her past seem false, and she feels as if she missing something. Nikita goes a search for who she really is but her findings are nothing like what she expected...
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Book Two: Vacant Past

Comments(9)

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18 days ago Trin Aster said:

I read all of it and I really like it!! So good!

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19 days ago Rose C. said:

Wow! I was totally into that and you did a good job keeping me on the edge of my seat. Thank you for writing that!

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about 1 month ago Roanoke Wilde said:

I only got to read the prologue and first two chapters but...I LOOVED IT!! I'm already intrigued, and can't wait to find out more about Nikita and the person who found the journal. GOOD JOB!! :) I'll come back!!

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over 1 year ago CeceO (On&off) said:

I love the character, Nikita! This is an incredible novel, although there are many spelling mistakes that can be easily corrected. Good work! I was so interested in it that I couldn't put it down!

Reviews(3)

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11 days ago Penny Wing said:

Vacant Memory is a great story, although not without flaws. There are many spelling and grammar errors; maybe you should check over it one more time. There is also a problem with sentence fluency. Often words are repeated more than once in a sentence, making it confusing and harder to follow. There was a good use of foreshadowing in the prologue, I really liked that. However, in order to fully utilize that you need to build up the suspense more. The scene where Nikita is in front of the president, you should drag it out more; make the president seem more uncertain about what to do so the reader keeps reading. Vacant Memory is an overall good story, though, and the concept is amazing. Keep writing!

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18 days ago September Edenshaw said:

This is for the review. I give honest opinions, rather than giving fake compliments.

First things first. Spelling of Prologue. It's not prolouge, maybe you should check that.

It's interesting. I loved the way you described things and it felt as if I was there. I loved the ideas. There were some grammatical errors and some punctuations are missing, but it can be fixed. I liked it very much.

And the cover's interesting too. Who made that?

But anyway, hope this helps.