Dark Waves: Rewrite

Dark Waves: Rewrite

8 chapters / 10250 words

Approximately about 1 hour to read

Description:

Rated YA/teen nothing not parent approved in here. Stacy meets the mysterious Hunter out at her deceased uncles cabin. With stories surrounding legends of vampire stalkers, and Hunter acting strangely, Stacy must decide whats the most important, her safety or her feelings? Must she fight or flight? Will Hunter learn to curb his appetite or will Stacy become a victim?

Read and find out!

Genres:

Writing, Fantasy, Romance

Comments(30)

Tae kwon

11 months ago Tae Kwolfe said:

0-0 And you just leave it there? How can you not pick it back up?

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about 2 years ago Abby A said:

What, where's the rest? lol. I love the connection she has with her parents, it's very powerful. This was a great scene.

For faith

about 2 years ago Rose Johnson said:

Love love love love it. Seriously, this was awesome. A good piece of advice not just to Stacy but any and every teenage girl. The things stated, they were powerful and meaningful.

AND SHE ADMITTED TO HERSELF THAT IT WAS LOVE. So there's that...

Yay!

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about 2 years ago Hana said:

the talk??? omggggggggg i have to know!!!!!!! i think elaborating on the romance/kissing/etc would help this story. hope we learn more about his werewolf-ism.... :)))

Reviews(11)

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over 1 year ago E. Anderson said:

CHAPTER ONE EVALUATION

Great job! I enjoyed reading this chapter and will probably be reading on. I already like the main character, and the plot seems fairly interesting.

CRITIQUES

I feel like you could add more description to this. It would enhance the piece, and there's a bit of a lack of it here. Just add some adjectives here and there, and you'll be all set!

I was a little confused at the beginning, what with the multiple conversations going on. I couldn't tell where Abby was, and who was interrupting who.

While it was a long chapter, it seemed a bit too rushed towards the end, when they arrived where they were going. Just add a couple more sentences, I think.

COMPLIMENTS

Dialogue was excellent. It showed the characters' personalities well, and helped move the plot along nicely.

Overall, you made me want to read on, and that's a great accomplishment for a writer! As I said before the plot was intriguing and I'll probably be reading further in this story!

Keep up the beautiful work, Lea! - Elizabeth

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about 2 years ago Fates Fabel said:

Interesting conversation with the parents. Each of them show their own takes on the issue and show their own experiences. Especially dad with how their relationship went.

I'm interesting to know the conversation Stacy will have with Hunter. I'm actually interested of how it will go. I feel as you develop both characters, the more I'm becoming attached to them. I know things will not always be sunshine and rainbows (Considering he still has a secret to share) but I am eager to learn how it plays out. Please keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more!!