Double Check the List

Double Check the List

1 chapter / 223 words

Approximately 1 minute to read

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[WINNER OF ROUND ONE OF THE 2015 MARCH MATCH-UP]

“You can knock down kingdoms on a whim. What you need is someone to make sure you don't get hit by a carriage when you cross the street.” - Scott Lynch, The Republic of Thieves

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almost 2 years ago Shelby Fox said:

This story made me laugh. I love how your characters are snarky and good humored about it. It kind of reminds me of my brothers. The last line was priceless! If something bad did happen, he wanted to make good of the situation. Good luck during the next round :)

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almost 2 years ago Katheryn Edmunds said:

This is delightful and would have made me laugh out loud, had I not read it while at work. The slight snarky attitude and charm and wit that is already so evident in the main character, as well as the sarcastic tone of who I assume is his adviser, makes me yearn for more of this story! Please, please consider continuing it!

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almost 2 years ago William Krause said:

Great job!! It's not easy working something with such a limit on words. You did very well on presenting a succinct, yet distinct, scene. The interaction us humorous and enjoyable. Well done.