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For the second round in the March Matchup :)
We have to use the dialogue: “That plan didn’t fly, genius, and now we’re short a turret.”
In 250 words or less.
The Vampires are winning, we have lost hope.
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almost 2 years ago Linda D said:
Zane’s always been taller… - you need the ‘s
“My throat goes dry.” should be on its own line, and no comma after the prompt. Otherwise I think it’s your MC talking, whereas it’s Zane.
And you might put her thoughts in italics, when she’s talking to herself.
Best of luck.
10 months ago Huntress said:
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almost 2 years ago Grace Adamson said:
It was written very well. You did a good job of covering your bases with background information. Some of the dialogue I was a little confused on, because I didn't know who was speaking. Other than that, excellent.