Ask for Directions

Ask for Directions

1 chapter / 247 words

Approximately 1 minute to read

Description:

[WINNER OF ROUND FOUR OF THE 2015 MARCH MATCH-UP]

It doesn't hurt to stop.

Featuring the (questionably) dynamic duo from "Double Check the List."

Comments(4)

Looking for the doctor

over 1 year ago Naturesnest said:

He definitely seems to be a reliable servant who deserves a raise! Haha. And I liked how you used the prompt quote. It's hard to use that one without stepping out of the story and saying it in Doc's voice, but your character is a very royal and dramatic character. It sounds like something he would definitely say! Great job! I really enjoyed reading this story!

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about 2 years ago Coral Vaci said:

I love this so much it made me laugh, great work!

Watermelon

over 2 years ago Shelby Fox said:

I love these two! They are so amusing to read about. I got confused when my map was upside down...once. He definitely deserves a raise. Great job on making it to the finals!

Me 1963

over 2 years ago Linda D said:

I think the omnipotent POV didn’t pull me into the story. If it had been written from Tannam’s POV it would have been better. Do you have time to tweak?

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