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[WINNER OF ROUND FOUR OF THE 2015 MARCH MATCH-UP]It doesn't hurt to stop.Featuring the (questionably) dynamic duo from "Double Check the List."
over 1 year ago Naturesnest said:
He definitely seems to be a reliable servant who deserves a raise! Haha. And I liked how you used the prompt quote. It's hard to use that one without stepping out of the story and saying it in Doc's voice, but your character is a very royal and dramatic character. It sounds like something he would definitely say! Great job! I really enjoyed reading this story!
about 2 years ago Coral Vaci said:
I love this so much it made me laugh, great work!
about 2 years ago Shelby Fox said:
I love these two! They are so amusing to read about. I got confused when my map was upside down...once. He definitely deserves a raise. Great job on making it to the finals!
about 2 years ago Linda D said:
I think the omnipotent POV didn’t pull me into the story. If it had been written from Tannam’s POV it would have been better. Do you have time to tweak?
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