Good Domestic Help

Good Domestic Help

1 chapter / 249 words

Approximately 1 minute to read

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2015 GRAND FINALIST WINNER MarchMatchup final Round. “This.” He sighed, sweeping his arm through the air. “This is what ignorance does.”

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2 days ago MrRobot3 said:

Brilliant Book ! I recommend it to everyone !Demodex

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23 days ago BlackRose said:

The ending is so funny, I love it so much, a little twist if this was real life!

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8 months ago Jeffrey Mansour said:

That was hilarious! The last sentence made me laugh out loud. No wonder it won first place in the tournament!

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about 1 year ago Emily Alice said:

This was clever! I wasn't sure what to expect at first but I loved it. Too funny! Thank you for sharing.

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8 months ago Jeffrey Mansour said:

I don't notice any mistakes, as a self-appointed editor:)! Five stars!

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about 1 year ago M.E.M. said:

Just from the title this story is amazing! If you have ever seen Bye Bye Birdie there is a mom called Doris McAfee and I played her in my school’s production. I had to learn how to become domesticated Doris. This story reminds me of that and I laughed through it. To sum up my review This story is outstanding and I’m happy it won.