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Masquerade
1 chapter / 1198 words
Approximately 6 minutes to read
Description:
How well do you know Will Orson? ~ Winner of the Enemy Contest! (Cover courtesy Google.)
Comments(65)
11 months ago Lania Loree said:
What can I say? The hint of humor in the opening high school scene slowly morphed into a heart-stopping perspective from the dangerous end of a gun. The whole thing was smooth and well-written--brilliant.
11 months ago Steffi Singh said:
Oh my gosh...this is so well written. I could see what was happening, and I loved the way you started and ended it. Great job!
11 months ago Lynn Andrews said:
This is dark and gripping. Good luck in the contest, Julia! :)
11 months ago Rose Rivera said:
This is really good. I think it does go a little fast though and I was unclear about them being true enemies. I think this is a really good base though, so good luck!
Reviews(9)
5 months ago Taylor Marie said:
Wow, I will definitely say that this was a well written short story and that you deserved to be the winner. Who would've ever thought that Will would take aim? Or that he would be working as a terrorist? You did the unthinkable, my friend, and it was beautiful. I congratulate you on winning! :D, I didn't see any grammar mistakes, there may be some, but since the writing was so magnificent it was overlooked.
10 months ago IzWiz said:
WOW! at first i thought the book was just going to be about a girl in high school. After that when the story went forward in time and Charlotte was at the ball with Will and Will was pointing the gun at her but Will didnt know that the girl behind the mask was Charlotte I was astonished! I cant believe Will in the end aimed at her! Great book, lovely suspense... PLEASE WRITE MORE!