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There are an awful lot of character types in the world, some more real than others...
3 months ago Haley Wingate said:
My heart seriously melted. This is such an adorable story!!
over 1 year ago Sophia d'Amiguet said:
I loved this story's plot, narrator and tone of voice!
over 1 year ago Kenny said:
I love it! The idea itself is intriguing and your style is flawless. I love the way you play with words and use them to your advantage. It was a fun read!
almost 2 years ago Theresa Rose said:
I thought this was good, especially the end where it turns out he isn't so evil, however, I thought the beginning seemed a bit disjointed. It didn't have any flow to it. The contest allows you to have at 1,000 words I believe, so maybe try and make the first part a bit more connected instead of such fragmented thoughts. Otherwise really great job! If you're feeling up to it I would love if you could check out my piece "Thomas" but it's alright if you don't want to!
almost 2 years ago Carrie VanNorden said:
The beginning is confusing and it seems to be repetitive.