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A girl thought she had it all.
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over 1 year ago Zoe Holloway said:
Wow, this is an amazing piece, I really like it. Although there are parts where I had to re-read the paragraph. Just a suggestion, but my English teacher always told us that the best way to perfect a writing is to read it aloud to yourself, then make the changes as you go.
Over all, this is a really great poem