Oysters

Oysters

1 chapter / 694 words

Approximately 3 minutes to read

Description:

The beginning of a romance, done exclusively in dialogue.

Comments(11)

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over 2 years ago Sydney Lacroix said:

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This is so funny and entertaining to read. I loved the main characters and the story. Although, with just the dialogue, it is really easy to get confused on which person is talking. Other than that, I see nothing wrong with it. Thanks, and have a nice day!

~Sydney

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over 2 years ago Molly E said:

The title really makes it interesting! I'm surprised by what it actually ended up meaning. I know you didn't add dialogue tags, and probably for a reason; but I'm confused on whose talking. I would maybe every five sentences say one just to add a small clarification.

Also if he dropped his phone, how did she end up getting a hold of him?

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over 2 years ago writer said:

this was really funny omg

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over 2 years ago C.F.Ash said:

This is entertaining. I definitely enjoy this :)

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over 2 years ago Evie Swings said:

I didn't have a problem understanding the dialogue-only concept at all. I think it is a very engaging way to write. Good job. The story was amusing and cute. I'd read it again, definitely!

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over 2 years ago Alexa Ferris said:

I love the humor - but maybe add a bit more romance! I know that these two just met, but I just don't feel a spark. Also, the part about one of them lying about liking oysters was a little confusing - just because I couldn't tell who was speaking. Otherwise, this is really great and very creative, good job! I love it! :)