Like Copper on my Tongue

Like Copper on my Tongue

1 chapter / 442 words

Approximately 2 minutes to read

Description:

This is what it feels like to lose someone you love.

Genres:

Writing, Short Story

Comments(21)

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over 5 years ago Emma Kemp said:

I like sad stories - so I love this.

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over 6 years ago Katherine the Great said:

Wow. Heavy stuff. This is a very good piece, and you're an excellent writer. However, you are a little comma-crazy (hahha don't worry, I'm the same way.) Other than that, this is fantaaastic and emotional and beautiful and awesome and a bunch of other positive adjectives. I could definitely see this published in a magazine or something. Great work.

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over 6 years ago Katherine the Great said:

Wow. Heavy stuff. This is a very good piece, and you're an excellent writer. However, you are a little comma-crazy (hahha don't worry, I'm the same way.) Other than that, this is fantaaastic and emotional and beautiful and awesome and a bunch of other positive adjectives. I could definitely see this published in a magazine or something. Great work.

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over 6 years ago Matt Stone said:

Dark and disturbing story. Really heartfelt.

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almost 4 years ago Wolf said:

OMG! This brought tears to my eyes. This is amazing. So very deep with emotions and lots of feelings. So very good in the word flow and everything about it is amazing. The length a good size and how you kept the flow easy and leveled is amazing! I have to say you should win an award for this. This is amazing Hun. :) Keep writing from the heart.

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over 5 years ago Sabrina Nelson said:

This is phenomenally written! The emotions so raw and intense, I felt crushing grief myself. The language and imagery were beautiful and telling, with just enough balance of prose and description. It was the perfect length for what I assume to be the desired effect. Very well done!