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Winning entry for the Halloween Contest! :)
about 1 year ago flyaway katie said:
Even though I had a good idea of the ending from the contest theme, I still found it compelling. The flashbacks to different times tied in well with the character being a ghost. The cover art is beautiful too, an excellent choice.
about 1 year ago Maria said:
All I can say is wow.
over 1 year ago Josie Rapacz said:
I like the idea but it needs a little fine tuning to really bring it to life.
over 1 year ago Madison Elizabeth said:
Wow. I felt as if I were in the story.
about 1 year ago Baird Wahlander said:
Pretty darn good if not predictable. I mean I had an idea what Mary was from the start but still a very good read. I'm a little confused about the officer being there, though. If they're are new people living in the house why are police investigating the house?
about 1 year ago Sarah Summers said:
I enjoyed reading this short story. The story itself needs to be revised a little - polished more but other than that it'll be a jem. Well done! And an excellent job at creating a story that leaves you reading until the very end.