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**Contest Winner!! :D *** I plan on going through and fleshing this out a LOT more when I have time to do so!
over 1 year ago Hannah Banunu said:
Are these books supposed to have exactly 666 words? Chilling! Lovely book, I can't wait to read the edited version though.
over 1 year ago A.N.Kingsley said:
This was a very interesting take on moving on. It's not something I would have thought of. You have wonderful descriptions, especially when she's walking into the house and says, "What have they done to you." That kind of broke my heart. Great job, and congratulations!
over 1 year ago Berenice "the Dove" Hudson said:
over 1 year ago Ghost Venom said:
Felt a shiver while reading nicely done.
over 1 year ago Tory F. said:
Wow!! Super well-written and descriptive. The ending was beautiful and unexpected. This is short and sweet, and I love it!
over 1 year ago FaLLen Angel said:
This was an amazing story I loved it!! It needed nothing. Great Job. Keep Writing.=)