i Want To Be Something i'm Not

i Want To Be Something i'm Not

1 chapter / 220 words

Approximately 1 minute to read

Description:

I promise I'm a whole lot more arrogant and self absorbed and confident in real life than this makes me out to be.

Genres:

Writing, Poetry

Comments(6)

Brown crystals

over 6 years ago Krystal Swarovski said:

i loved this. it was amazing.

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over 6 years ago ~*Dana*~ said:

I adore this!!!!! i think it is one of the best poems I've read on Figment! the rhyming makes it just that much better! :))))))))) awesome job!

Shoes

over 6 years ago Erin Leiser said:

thanks a ton!

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over 6 years ago Artemis Nihil said:

this is absolutely brilliant. I'm very impressed.

Reviews(1)

Righthandoflight

over 6 years ago Luke Pencil said:

Well, bugger. I think that's the most heartfelt thing of yours that I've ever read. I am dumbstruck. Everything worked. Everything. Imagery, pathos; the rhythm was phenomenal. I've never heard you speak out loud but your voice practically thundered through this. Well, except you weren't thundering. Your voice did not thunder so much as it shone from every word. It gave the piece life, immense life. That was incredible. I have literally nothing bad to say about this piece. I don't think I could improve it if I tried. It's a masterwork.

On a more personal note, goddamn everyone feels this way one time or another. The beauty and clarity that you use to broadcast such awkward, aching feelings... No, wrong way to start the sentence. Basically, I feel like I need to be someone I'm not way, too. A lot. Feeling that way a little bit right now, though about something unrelated. Reading this made me feel better. So thank you for that. Your writing turned on a little light somewhere in my soul and that is a great gift. Your words have immense power. I think you will come to realize that more over time. In the meantime, I hope you feel more comfortable inside yourself. The rock star would not be able to write like you do.