What the World Will Never Know

What the World Will Never Know

5 chapters / 1337 words

Approximately 7 minutes to read

Description:

Clara is telepathic, and when her mom finds out, she calls a mental facility. Clara is bounced around from place to place until she comes to a evil-lab-place...our story starts here(scary music)

Genres:

Action, Adventure, Novel

Comments(21)

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over 5 years ago Lilly Moore said:

This was very interesting! I got a bit confused between Clara and Annabelle, but other than that it was really good! :)

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over 5 years ago ERBL said:

I peed :) lo jk!

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over 5 years ago Whimsically_Me said:

Good story, a little hard to follow sometimes, but still good. Will you be finishing it? If so, please write some more of it soon! It had some typos, but those can easily be fixed! Good job, and happy writing!!! :)

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over 6 years ago Ecadnac Nosnhoj said:

I really want to read more. I'm very intrigued and would like to find out what happens to Annabelle and Clara. Please write more!!

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over 4 years ago Danielle Wesley said:

This is such a great concept! I love the idea; I think it's a great place to start a really well written story. It's slightly confusing which, if intended by the author, is a good tactic to keep readers guessing. I think the writing itself could be cleaned up grammatically which I think would lead to more "suspenseful confusion" versus "actual confusion." I really like the premise you have and would love to read more.

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almost 6 years ago Anna Browne said:

Interesting and unique idea :) but I got confuse in the beginning... Try showing us the dream first. I'll geta bigger audience :)

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